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    August 07

    七夕作小诗一首：）

    送故人

     

    清曙霭京畿，

     

    暑风戏绡衣。

     

    七七复何夕，

     

    悠悠遥相依。

     

     

     

    昔日隔瀚海，

     

    今朝共晨曦。

     

    鸣琴相与悦，

     

    何慕鸾凤栖？

    5:32 PM | Blog it

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    hui huiwrote:
    感觉'依'改'忆'更佳呵呵
    Nov. 28
    Belinda Lengwrote:
    纪大哥就别取笑我啦~~~呵呵~~~倒是你的才思文笔还是一如既往的让人感叹呢！
    Aug. 14
    童话 童wrote:
    蓉蓉：“你终于重现江湖了”呵呵呵！看到了你的留言，“知音难求啊”谢谢！不知道你最近一切可好？向未来妹夫问好！哈哈哈！
    Aug. 14
    yue tengwrote:
    好诗，看到你给我评论，让我感到好温暖啊，谢谢，我们都要加油啊～！！
    Aug. 9
    小平 羊wrote:
    Hi,写的很不错..七夕情...
    Aug. 8
    悉尼，我的心里有你！wrote:
    下阕写的更好些~
    Aug. 8
    Belinda Lengwrote:
    呵呵谢谢AmyMM,国内还是蛮认可七夕的，诗歌讲究的是意境，“感时花溅泪, 恨别鸟惊心”就是这个道理. 而意境是需要懂的人去品的：）
    Aug. 8
    牛wrote:
    现在好像七夕很流行啊～～
    Aug. 8
    pengfei wangwrote:
    还不错:)  不过主题表现并不突出。
    Aug. 7
    zhang amywrote:
    才女啊～～～
    Aug. 7

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